Super Granny(AKA Cameron Woodard) By: Cameron Woodard
Date Submitted: 04/25/2004 11:25:17
Category: / Literature / Creative Writing
Length: 4 pages (1224 words)
Category: / Literature / Creative Writing
Length: 4 pages (1224 words)
Super Granny
(A.K.A. Cameron Woodard)
<Tab/>"Stop, evil super villain!" Super Granny shouted forcefully.
<Tab/>"Never," exclaimed Speedy. "I WILL reveal your true identity!!"
<Tab/>It was a battle of super hero and super villain. Cameron Woodard simply could not stand the thought of everyone at Rockland District High School knowing he was the one and only Super Granny. If his …
Is this Essay helpful? Join now to read this particular paper
and access over 480,000 just like this GET BETTER GRADES
and access over 480,000 just like this GET BETTER GRADES
…friends and their nickname for me, Super Granny. I know it says i got an 80%, but i don't hink it deserves that. My teacher was really easy on us, and i don't think this essay should deserve higher than an 80%.
Suggestions for Improvement
-less adjectives
-earlier climax
-longer storyline
-more information about characters
-more informative about settings
-better descriptions of characters
-use proper grammer for quotes instead of slang
-better super villians
-more super villians
Need a custom written paper? Let our professional writers save your time.
Not a member yet?
